Saturday 29 August 2015

Steel and the Magic Button - By Riley.B


Once there was a very Rare animal part ogre ,part vampire ,part bee ,part button collector ,part bird ,part human and part elephant.

 He was in war, war was very dangerous, everyone needed weapons but the very Rare animal  did not need weapons because, he was very strong and powerful because he was part elephant,vampire and bird those were the strongest bits of his body, His wings had to be very strong to left him because he was part elephant,part huge bee and more. 

One day in war steel " as steel was the very rare animals name " went to war against another country. But somewhere in the woods on the ground steel found a button but what he didn't know was that the button steel had found was magic! 

All of a sudden the other country's soldiers was surrounding steel even though everyone did not like getting a close up of him, as he was starting to flap his wings to start flying away the magic button started glowing and then couldn't fly, He was trapped then the captain came on a very strong airplane with a strong piece of Rope, and it picked steel up off the ground, steel did not know why he could not fly, he thought something was maybe wrong with his wings. 

Steel had just remembered a t.v channel that said there was a magic button in the woods, but Steel was sure that he had not found that magic button! 

They went Back to the war house, Then Steel saw a red glow in the bush, then he went to that red glow in the bush and picked something up that was red and glowing, he couldn't figure out what it was because it's glow was very very strong.

 suddenly the glow stopped and he saw three tiny holes in the middle and it was round he matched it up to his button's including the one he found in the woods and surprisingly it matched up to the button that he found in the woods. 

At that time steel realized that he had found a magic reverse button and the magic button, then he rubbed the magic reverse button on his wings and then after one night he had breakfast and then he went outside and tried to fly, it took some time but then he did it he was up in the air flying, then he put the two magic buttons in a safe place in the cabbon were only he would look so nobody would ever make the same mistake that he had made ever again.
                                 

THE END

2 comments:

  1. Hi, Riley I really like how you have made it part ogre ,part vampire ,part bee ,part bird ,part human, elephant and a part button collector. I also like how you have used detail by saying what it is and what his name is.it is a really cool and magical story I like it.

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  2. Hi, Riley I really like how you have made it part ogre ,part vampire ,part bee ,part bird ,part human, elephant and a part button collector. I also like how you have used detail by saying what it is and what his name is.it is a really cool and magical story I like it.

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